Character: Enora Shepard - Soldier - Sole Survivor - Colonist
I aplogize for any spelling or grammar errors beforehand.
Yes, I'm aware this is a rather short one. Another installment of making Shepard more 'human', but this time I added more of a womanly aspect to her. The idea came solely from reading a different fanfiction ([link]
I tried to preserve the sweet and tender feel of the actual romance scene we were given in ME2. I'm absolutely in love with this pairing, so I had some fun writing this.
However, I am indifferent about how this came out. The more I reread it, the more I'm beginning to think that I made Shepard completely out of character. I find it hard trying to write the inner thoughts of the Commander, since in the game you never actually get too deep in that regard. You always see the outside features of Shepard with her responses, but never the inner workings of her mind. Even though I customized her features and make the decisions throughout the game, I've never been able to consider Shepard as my own in the least bit. Attempting to write her as my own is an odd feeling. I think that's why I'm unsure about the accuracy of this particular piece.
Anyhow, I hope that I was successful in portraying a realistic Shepard. Also, kudos to the individuals who catch the Terminator reference. (-_^)~
I pray you enjoy, and thank you for reading.
The Lost: [link]